Situation: Two character meet awkwardly at a local gym
Complication: One of the character isn't comfortable around children, of which the other character has
Theme: nobody is perfect
Detail: The characters were educated a rival universities'colleges
And, here we go to my story idea:
Title: Another Different Love Story
A young man, who has a small feature, walks in to the Gym and waves excitedly.
“Syaoran, long time no see. It’s nice to see you.” Roberto said before smirking. “You still small as ever. You didn’t grow at all.”
Syaoran glares at him with hatred. “I am growing two inches than before. And, for your information, I am taller for average Asian People.”
“Still, you are the smallest among all of us.” Harris chimed in and make the other three—Roberto, Davis, and Jeremy—laugh really hard.
Syaoran glares at them before smirks. “And yet, this smallest person here becomes your captain of the team.”
The other four suddenly become quiet. They feel something bad will come to them and their feeling become right when the object of their teasing open his mouth.
“I will increase your training menu today. All off you run around the gym thirty laps.”
“ARGHH…NOOO….” They shouted with agony and make Syaoran smirks before he walks to the changing room.
After he comes out, he sees his friends already running and follows them. They are running for half an hour and collapsed to the floor.
“You …really….devil…” Roberto said while panting hard and tried to regain his breath.
Syaoran only smirks and drink a bottle of water calmly. “Huh, what did you say? I can’t hear properly.”
Roberto glares at him but can’t do anything because he really tired. Davis follows to the conversation. “I don’t get it. Why did you not seem tired? You run with us and yet you still look compose and collected. So unfair.”
“Yeah, where that energy comes from that tiny body?” Harris said from the floor—too tired to stand up or sit—and get another glare from their captain.
“Said another word and I will increase your training and don’t forget I will bench you at the next match. Will I remind you that the match is between our best rival and you can’t show down your skill to that point guard of it.”
Those suddenly make Harris really quiet and obey everything the captain order. That situation makes the other laugh and shudder to think that their captain is really devil. Talking about a devil, they still don’t get it why the devil captain can get a girlfriend who are really kind and look like an angel. Although the devil and angel must date secretly through an angel is a manager from their rival team and the worst—a little sister from the rival team captain.
They still remember very well the meeting from both of them. The day is like today—they were teasing and joking about the height and Syaoran gave them a ‘special training’ that make them couldn’t move their body—when a young girl come to the gym. At the beginning, they didn’t know her and as a gentleman, they asked about her destination. They were really surprised when they saw that the girl literally and physically punched their captain straight at his face. After a long talk and an explanation, they knew that it was all a misunderstanding. The girl was punching a wrong person—she thought that captain is the man who breaks her best friend heart—and she felt ashamed.
Captain only sighed and then after those awkward moments, gave her a pat and smile. They snickered behind his back because they could see a heart is coming from the girl eyes. The rest is predictable, the girl comes regularly to their practice and after months they began dating—and know that the girl is a manager from the rival team.
“Syaoran,” a feminism voice calling their captain. They have a similar thought. “Speaking of devil…ups…we mean angel.”
They see that Syaoran greets his girlfriend, Sakura, and so quickly lost in their world. The world full of flower, rainbow, and fluffy cloud. They just shake their head and sigh. “They are so cute but also really nauseating,” all of them talk simultaneously with different tone and voice.
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Another story of mine and another perspective. I feel so much engage with this story that make this longer from before. Okay, what did you think? I hope this is okay.
Don't afraid to write. Remember, write first, edit later.
Believe me, you will really surprise with the result
I DID IT...ANOTHER DAY WITH THIS WRITING HABIT :)
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